Florence and the Machine

Florence and the Machine
Florence And The Machine

Tuesday, 1 November 2011

Our pitch comments from our peers- Conor and Leanne


Here are the comments given to us after we pitched our idea to our music video. most of the comments were about how were going to film the bird and how it would look good. After much planning and trial and errors we have decided to use a bird costume and a green screen to get the best possible effect. Another problem that arose over and over again in these comments was how the girl is going to kill the bird and show this. As well as the new complications of green screen we are going to use fist fulls of feathers and maybe make a miniature bird doll that can be used for one quick frame for when the girl kills the bird. Hopefully this wont confuse the audience and still be easy to follow. Another criticism was that they didn't think that the narrative planned could fill the time needed. With the song only being 2.59 mins we decided to do an 11 second brief opening which will explain the narrative more, also we have added more performance to fill the needed time.  A couple of things that worked well for us was our unique storyline. Many comments included 'good idea' and 'i like how the song related to the narrative'.

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