Introduction of our music video

Here is the first 27 seconds of music video. We have recently reedited this and are thinking about re shooting some shots and include some others. We also later need to add the bird on the log by using the Green screen effect. Were hoping that this flows but are still deciding on what shots to add and which ones to take out if any. This is also just the introduction and will be without music.
We think the idea of her stealing a phone she's found comes across well but might need to redo the shot of her walking away to make it look like she is being followed by the bird and that she's actually taken the phone. A thing that we definitely changing and redoing is the shot of the log. We think it needs to be longer and the log needs to be lower down so we can fit the video of the bird on top.